Memories so safe
kept in a place
like a green book
opening and closing
In a land of day
has ever been seen
no living breath
no human eyes
living their lives
Memories come and
Do as they please
never with woe
Sometimes they hurt
Sometimes they don't
But memories can succeed
annabeth on 20 October, 2017
this is such a lovely poem i really liked it thanks for writing it
Nikki E. on 2 October, 2016
Wow, you could be a great poet someday, as I was amazed at how excellent you are at poetry. Keep up the great work and continue with your poems!
Ella Rose on 7 November, 2014I'm blown away! Thats such a good idea especially for a poem. Well done!
Karsen the Dragon Rider on 25 September, 2014WOW! I never thought of it that way. Round of Applause! Here's another: Memories will fade All through the day Down from under and high above I remember my memories with hatred and love.
Tabea N. Starblue on 24 June, 2014Nice poem, I love it. The idea is good. The Theme is great to make a poem. Best wishes from Germany Tabea N. In the German version is my name Sternenblau
Bonisha on 28 April, 2014Can I tell u something? I know from my own heart u will become a famous writer or poet!! How old r u? I am your fan!!!!! Just like Cornelia !!!
Alicia on 23 October, 2013Thanks everybody!
Turtlegirl045(karla's daughter) on 18 October, 2013I liked it alot. Well goodbye,Turtlegirl045
Isobel C. on 27 September, 2013Interesting poem! I like the 'Memories' theme, and the fact that it has multiple lines in verses is unique. -Isobel
Amr El-Azizi on 2 September, 2013Nice poem, you have some good rhymes in there and it has a nice structure. The idea is also really cool, I like it.