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Alicia

Memories

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Memories so safe
kept in a place
like a green book
opening and closing

Far away
In a land of day
Where nothing
not anything
has ever been seen
ever seen

no living breath
no human eyes
Just memories
living their lives

Memories come and
memories go
Do as they please
never with woe

Sometimes they hurt
Sometimes they don't
But memories can succeed

10 comments

annabeth on 20 October, 2017

this is such a lovely poem i really liked it thanks for writing it

Nikki E. on 2 October, 2016

Wow, you could be a great poet someday, as I was amazed at how excellent you are at poetry. Keep up the great work and continue with your poems!

Ella Rose on 7 November, 2014

I'm blown away! Thats such a good idea especially for a poem. Well done!

Karsen the Dragon Rider on 25 September, 2014

WOW! I never thought of it that way. Round of Applause! Here's another: Memories will fade All through the day Down from under and high above I remember my memories with hatred and love.

Tabea N. Starblue on 24 June, 2014

Nice poem, I love it. The idea is good. The Theme is great to make a poem. Best wishes from Germany Tabea N. In the German version is my name Sternenblau

Bonisha on 28 April, 2014

Can I tell u something? I know from my own heart u will become a famous writer or poet!! How old r u? I am your fan!!!!! Just like Cornelia !!!

Alicia on 23 October, 2013

Thanks everybody!

Turtlegirl045(karla's daughter) on 18 October, 2013

I liked it alot. Well goodbye,Turtlegirl045

Isobel C. on 27 September, 2013

Interesting poem! I like the 'Memories' theme, and the fact that it has multiple lines in verses is unique. -Isobel

Amr El-Azizi on 2 September, 2013

Nice poem, you have some good rhymes in there and it has a nice structure. The idea is also really cool, I like it.