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Christie

Pieces of Glass

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Dear readers, please point out the mistakes in my stories. You are the best critics and guides! Please let me know if I should proceed or change it! Thank you, Christie.

Let me introduce you to my enchanted lantern: Sara. She can be an annoying chatterbox, I tell you, but is quite efficient when comes to forest finding.

It was a warm, sticky June night. We were roaming around the forest on my bicycle. Sara lay inside the basket.

“Do you really think She is here?” Sara chirped. “I’m sure that Bodkin, lied! A born muddleheaded dwarf he is! And to think you---”

“Look there!” I interrupted. I stopped and put the bicycle in a shade.

Ahead of us was a tall, large cave. Near the entrance, a few shards of glass lay. The pale moonlight glinted on them.

“Come on, let’s go inside,” I said, taking my lantern up.

She looking fearfully at the ground. “So Bodkin wasn’t lying after all…”

Torches lined up inside the cave. And bright red flames danced on top of them. The crackling of the fire echoed around.

“Look there,” I whispered, afraid that my echo shall awaken the Guardian of this cave.

On the feet of the torches lay some pieces of glass. I bent down to pick one but suddenly a voice loomed in:

“Who dares to get in my cave?”

It was a voice that curled my blood. A voice that reached the core of my heart. A voice as fiery and fearless as the leaping flames.

I froze in my place but my eyes strayed up. There She was… an enormous bird, red as burning fire… the Great Empress of Flames… the Phoenix.

A strange but strong fear grasped my heart as I remembered what Bodkin had told: Phoenix fire can turn people into glass.

But I stood up, fearlessly and dusted my skirt. “O Great Phoenix, I command you to follow me. We have matters to talk.”

17 comments

Bon45 on 21 November, 2018

Daniel on 30 October, 2018

What about some more male characters?

Christie on 29 October, 2018

Melissa, I'll surely write about ghosts!

Christie on 29 October, 2018

Daniel, I've the whole novel planned but I don't know if I can complete it. Here's the main plot: A prince is captured and he must be saved. The saviors include a researcher, her brother, a nymph, and many mythical creatures. Would you like me to include Anything?

Daniel on 29 October, 2018

A sweet story, but it's a clip. Christie, I want the whole novel.

Melissa on 28 October, 2018

Please can you write a story which has mythical creatures from Greek mythology like Medusa, Poseidon etc...

Allegra on 28 October, 2018

ehehe,actually it would be a massive relief if you don't i like reading stories not starring in them what about another protagonist?

Christie on 27 October, 2018

Thank you, Arya! Do you write stories in German? I saw your name...

Melissa on 27 October, 2018

I will like to see a monster or ghost in the next story.

Arya on 27 October, 2018

I come from Germany and my english is not the best, but I must say it is realy good!

Grace on 26 October, 2018

Are u coming to the chat? I would love to write like u!

Grace on 26 October, 2018

what about a heart warming story about a pet husky!

Christie on 26 October, 2018

Thanks Allegra! Actually, I'm writing a series. Would you mind if I put you as a protagonist?

Allegra on 26 October, 2018

Hello Christie! Your story is simply wonderful! I will be looking forward to the next one!

Christie on 26 October, 2018

Thank you so much, Grace and Melissa! What would you like to see in the next story?

Grace on 25 October, 2018

I will be looking forward to you writing more story's !

Melissa on 25 October, 2018

The story is really awesome!