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Greta R.

The unfortunate robbery

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Fleur Belle lived in a city in France, close to an old palace where her father worked, she went there daily to do homework and read.

She went there for as long as she knew, leaving all her favorite mystery stories.

She just came home from the library with a great new thriller book. Fleur loved mystery books. She kept an old book with pictures of her mother who was from Germany with great pictures sent by her mother, and letters as well.

Yesterday was her birthday and she got a new letter from her mother, with a very old picture, her mother has found in her new house, which was very old.

Bonjour Petite Fleur,

I hope you are well, I got your picture in the last letter, the palace is as beautiful as ever. This year I want to give you a special gift ...

Tickets to Germany, so you can visit me. I think it will be great, because we have not seen each other for three years, the picture you took of yourself was great! You've grown a lot since I last saw you.

I can hardly wait for you to go to Germany.

With all the love in the world, étoile la plus brillante.

She could hardly believe it, a ticket to Germany, she could hardly wait until she was on the train to Germany.

Not surprisingly, no one was there, in her favorite room, where the remains of her pictures and letters were hidden, from her mother. Then she saw a girl in the back of the room with Fleur's old picture from Germany her mother gave her. It was her favorite picture. There was a girl in the back of the room. She saw Fleur, opened a hidden door that she had never seen in her life, she looked over her shoulder at Fleur.

The girl kept the old picture, and the tickets in her hand, and ran into the little corridor. "Wait!" cried Fleur. But it was too late, the girl was gone, and her mother's picture and the ticket was also gone

3 comments

Emily Harper on 19 May, 2018

Lovely story it was just wonderful

E.M.B on 10 May, 2018

Your story is quite good.The way the story was told though was a bit strange focus on fitting certain things in a certain way so that the story would sound better, but indeed the story itself was beautiful and I love the ending.

Ella I. on 7 May, 2018

OH MY GOSH GRETA IT'S UP!!!!!!!! Yay! Amazing story! -Ella