Love Poem 2.0

Written by Pashynn F.

Preface

This poem was written February 4th of 2024. It’s basically the longer and more detailed version of Love Poem 1.0. So it’s deeper, but also definitely just as cringe worthy, if not more so {quickly skimming through it again} definitely more so. Again a lot of second thoughts about sending this one out… It is an attempt at explaining a sometimes fierce, stormy, and complicated emotion with words, and I hope you like it.

Loving not loved, 

And not wanted,

Though wanting,

Love, I’m not daunted. 

 

Though somewhat worried,

And filled with some fear,

All I can think about,

Is, do you care?

 

Filled with so much love,

I fear I will burst, 

And I am so worried, 

That you think the worst. 

 

And so I am speaking, 

And want you to hear,

Because I’ve wanted so long,

For you to be near. 

 

And all I’ve been wanting,

Is to hold you close,

But if it will ever happen,

Only God knows.

 

Cupid’s curved bow,

And his sharp dart;

I am filling over with love, 

It pierced my heart. 

 

And it is true,

I think of you every night,

Strong knight of mine,

Wish I could hold you tight.

 

So much love,

It hurts you’re not here;

I say again love,

I wish you were near.

 

I wish I could hold you, 

And you hold me;

And the rest of the world,

Would not be.

 

My love for you,

No words can describe, 

And all my love,

Runs deep inside.

 

The poem is ending,

But my love goes till,

My life is ended,

That or my will.

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Pashynn F. – 30 May 2025

Jewels, thank you so much for your comment . Hi Kaleb, so sorry I didn't answer sooner, I just saw your comment today. I was extremely sick for the whole month of April, covid or something. I caught it, was getting better, and then had a relapse. It was terrible, I was even really sick on my birthday (April 27), headaches all day and stuck in bed. But I'm better now (besides spring allergies), thank goodness. I've been busy with work but life's mostly pretty good, it's definitely rough sometimes. How are you doing?

jewels – 13 May 2025

OH MY GOODNESS, that is so beautiful I love the way, you depict your emotions. Your words have touched me

Kaleb – 16 April 2025

Hi P. It's been a long while since we've talked and I do apologize about that but I didn't see this poem till just now. I think it's a lovely poem. Your rhymes really work well and the subject is very touching. I'm glad to see there are still poems in your repertoire. How have you been?