King of Darkness, Queen of Light
I looked down the paths. One to my left one to my right.
I had no idea which way to go. Which way would lead me home.
I searched my mind for an answer, nothing came. I looked down the paths. One was covered in footsteps the other had just one set.
More people had gone left then right.
I made my decision. I turned down the left path.
Something in my mind tried to tell me to stop. But I had already made my decision. And I turned down the path of many footsteps.
After walking for what seemed like miles I came across a village.
It was small, but otherwise normal.
But as I walked towards it I failed to notice one important detail.
I trudged through the village not noticing the strange attributes the town held.
I couldn’t figure out why but everyone I saw was giving me mean looks, and expressions of scorn.
Something hit my arm. “We don’t want your kind here.” A voice yelled, followed by a couple jeers and cries, I looked up to see a group of villager sporting rocks.
Spooked, I turned around and ran out of the village. Blood dripping from my arm.
When I arrived at the outskirts of the forest I plopped onto the ground, breathing hard.
And that’s when I noticed, everything in the town was black. Black houses, black roads, black clothing, there was absolutely no color.
After figuring out that disturbing fact I tried to figure out the reason they had sent me away, I was still wearing my mourning clothes (which were of course black) I couldn’t think of any reason why they had sent me away.
I looked the same as them, I was wearing dark clothes…
After exhausting the possibilities I noticed the sun was going down so I curled up and fell asleep.
When I woke up it was almost midday.
Surprised I had slept so late I jerked up worried I would be in trouble.
Then I remembered I was far from home.
I sighed, hungry and thirsty, still trying to figure out why the villagers where so hostile.
I thought about the stories my father used to tell me of the land of Gloom.
One went like this:
In the land of Gloom there is no colors only black the color of night.
It’s ruled by the king of darkness who’s name is known to none.
He rules in a castle shrouded by fog which no one dare approach.
He sits on a black throne of thorns only comfortable to him.
The villages are weak and poor, and always unhappy.
And feel as if they are missing an important piece.
The one thing they are missing, something lost long ago, the gift of children.
Now they live in old run down houses everything black and unattractive and they shun children thinking they are evil, when that’s really what there missing.
That’s when it hit me.
Trisha on 10 July, 2021
I loved your story, it was interesting and I would truly like to know where your character will go from there. Like what was down the right path?
Faith on 2 June, 2020
Reihaneh on 31 May, 2020
Goood keep it
Emily on 30 May, 2020
I love the storyline and your vocabulary is incredible,I can just picture this world of yours. Cornelia would be proud, I’d love to see more of your stories too xxx.
Ingrid S. on 17 March, 2020
I loved it so much, please write more!
Melissa on 4 December, 2018
The story is spooky as well as mysterious. Keep it up!
Livi on 5 June, 2016Though this book is a slightly spooky, I agree that it could be a good read of a chapter book if, maybe, it could be longer. I would like to know more, for I cannot digest the knowledge properly, due to my curiosity but I do like this. -Livi Shira Kaylan
Zoe Davad on 31 March, 2016The story is very mysterious and I was on the edge of my seat while reading. It goes without saying that I may be seeing it on a bookshelf someday.
analos on 12 July, 2015i think it was wonderful! where did you get the idea??? I'm thinking of writing a book, but not sure if I should.
Ella Rose on 7 November, 2014This is a great story but how did she get there?
A.G. on 7 April, 2014yes. but i'm having trouble revising it.
Cassandra Rose on 5 April, 2014The story didn't seem to be complete. Is there a another chapter to it?
A.G. on 13 December, 2013Thanks! Your comments always brighten my day!
Francisca on 12 December, 2013Even though this story is mostly about gloom and darkness, it actually brightened my day. The mystery in it is really good. I also liked the incorporation of the gloom story in it too, which really added to the story. Overall, I immensely enjoyed reading this and hope you write more!
haelyn fitz on 26 November, 2013That is very well done you inspire me thanks for the good read good luck with the next chapter!!
A.G. on 22 November, 2013I am working on the second chapter.
Lia Hope on 23 October, 2013Is there more to this? I would love that to read more.
hampton on 14 October, 2013I love that this is very mysterious and it made me wonder is it a journey to find your destiny?