LIFE 1.0
Written by Pashynn F.
Silver
Gold
Young
Old
Go go
Never stop
Never get
Any prop
Slow
Fast
Make it
And last
So much
No help
Cry out
Yelp yelp
Get man
Get wife
Live a long
Short crazy
LIFE
More stories by Pashynn F.
Written by Pashynn F.
Silver
Gold
Young
Old
Go go
Never stop
Never get
Any prop
Slow
Fast
Make it
And last
So much
No help
Cry out
Yelp yelp
Get man
Get wife
Live a long
Short crazy
LIFE
More stories by Pashynn F.
This story has received 3 comments
Leave a commentHello Pashyn! I wanted to say, I simply loved this poem! It flowed really well, and I loved the short lines!
Again, thanks so much Kaleb! And actually the reason it's 1.0 is because I have two more Life poems I have written that I just have to edit, as they are simply rough drafts right now. I will definitely publish them her when I do.
I will also get some of my other poems published here. Have a good day readers! Adios!
As I read this I was nearly singing the words. It's like a song of sorts, and I love the rhyme pattern and conclusion. Can't wait to read more of your work!