LIFE 1.0

Written by Pashynn F.

Silver

Gold

Young

Old

Go go

Never stop

Never get

Any prop

Slow

Fast

Make it

And last

So much

No help

Cry out

Yelp yelp

Get man

Get wife

Live a long

Short crazy

LIFE

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Gabriella Wisdom – 16 October 2024

Hello Pashyn! I wanted to say, I simply loved this poem! It flowed really well, and I loved the short lines!

Pashynn F. – 10 September 2024

Again, thanks so much Kaleb! And actually the reason it's 1.0 is because I have two more Life poems I have written that I just have to edit, as they are simply rough drafts right now. I will definitely publish them her when I do.

I will also get some of my other poems published here. Have a good day readers! Adios!

Kaleb – 23 August 2024

As I read this I was nearly singing the words. It's like a song of sorts, and I love the rhyme pattern and conclusion. Can't wait to read more of your work!