Darkness
Written by Grace
It holds me,
But it cannot contain me
It touches me,
But I will never feel it
My heart will pound,
But never fast enough
It shows around me,
Yet I fell no a thing
It is always around me,
From the darkest places of misery,
To the bottom of a very twisted heart.
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Leave a commentI agree. Sad stories, I have found, are what all of my favourite books are. The pain has a complicated feeling to it, and I think the beauty is that in the end it usually turns out fine, but its paradoxical. It makes you feel great for the characters in the story. Cornelia Funkes books are like that, especially the Reckless books. There are so many people that are suffering, but when you look at it, you all see how human it is. I think thats why sad books are so beautiful.
Beautiful job! As Meggie said in Inkheart, "Why [are] sad stories often so beautiful?"
It is really good
SOOO cool
WOOOW!!! That was amazing! (I am also called Grace!)
Wow! nice poem. Is it trying to scare me?
I like the tone of the poem. I wonder what the poem is about? Are you trying to describe darkness? It is a nice poem.
that was amazing am gonna use it for school.
thx xx
I want to read that again! It was amazing!
Aww pretty poem
heres another about fear
Fear raises hair
its hard to bear
just close your eyes to arise
in the morning
Beautiful!!!
Wow! This is a great poem
The poem touched the bottom of my heart>>>
I am pretty much speechless, that was incredible
WOW!! Only One Word: excellent!!
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