Written by Grace
It holds me,
But it cannot contain me
It touches me,
But I will never feel it
My heart will pound,
But never fast enough
It shows around me,
Yet I fell no a thing
It is always around me,
From the darkest places of misery,
To the bottom of a very twisted heart.
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Beautiful job! As Meggie said in Inkheart, "Why [are] sad stories often so beautiful?"
It is really good
WOOOW!!! That was amazing! (I am also called Grace!)
Wow! nice poem. Is it trying to scare me?
I like the tone of the poem. I wonder what the poem is about? Are you trying to describe darkness? It is a nice poem.
that was amazing am gonna use it for school.
I want to read that again! It was amazing!
Aww pretty poem
heres another about fear
Fear raises hair
its hard to bear
just close your eyes to arise
in the morning
Wow! This is a great poem
The poem touched the bottom of my heart>>>
I am pretty much speechless, that was incredible
WOW!! Only One Word: excellent!! DD