Beyond there
Written by Rosie
B eyond the planet,
T here are continents.
B eyond the continents,
T here are countries.
B eyond the countries,
T here are settlements.
B eyond the settlements,
T here are creatures.
B eyond the creatures,
T here are people.
B eyond the people,
T here are faces.
B eyond the face,
T here is a mind.
B eyond the mind,
T houghts.
B eyond the thoughts,
T here are feelings.
With the feelings,
There comes thoughts.
B eyond the mind,
T here is a heart.
B ea-
T ing,
B ea-
T ing,
B ea-
T ing.
B eyond the beat,
T here is Life.
Life is beyond
Anything.
Life
B ea-
T ing,
B ea-
T ing,
B ea-
T ing.
B eyond life,
T here is nothing.
Beyond feelings,
There are thoughts
F eelings,
T houghts,
F eel,
T hink.
Life is..
B ea-
T ing,
B ea-
T ing,
BeaTing.
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Leave a commentaw thanks alot
Personally, and I may sound like a hypocrite, this one is better than Egyptian cobra.
I really love the rhythm, like it's from a song. My brother has a poem like this that's about a Neverman. Basically, he's never because he doesn't exist. I was sort of reminded of that poem by this one. Hopefully this one won't be your last poem, cause I'd really love to see more. 
Ty Gabriella! I wrote this a while back lol
So cool!