The Solar Eclipse
Chapter 1: The beginning
I have something that not a lot of people know... I can do things that the human mind can't even comprehend. I have powers. Not teleportation or mind control. I have this power, where I can destroy entire planets. I can read minds and... I can see the future. Not very good but I can see the future.
Chapter 2: The prophecy
I looked at my best friend, Karin. Something seemed off. Instated of her coming to my house to help me with my homework, she's always with Mr.Taiyo. He's Japanese. At first I thought she was training karate so she could be a ninja. Bit when I hit her, she only said 'ow' instead of flipping me, or kicking me in the stomach. She's also very quiet and sit alone at lunch. 'Hey,' I said to her one day 'wanna go to the lake after school? I need some help on my homework... I'm falling math again.' I was hoping she would say 'yes' but she only said 'maybe later Brandon'. I was really sad that day... Karin was my only friend.
I decided to go to the lake after school anyways. Then, I met this lady named Miss.Dal. She's Korean. She asked me, if I knew Karin. 'Yeah she's with some person named Mr.Taiyo' I said. Then I felt like lightning hit me... I felt this power surging though me. Then everything went dark.
I finally woke up. (I didn't know I was asleep). And I saw Miss. Dal leaning over a table saying 'I found the last part of the prophecy' into a phone. "Where am I?'' I asked. Miss. Dal only looked at me, then finally said, "Good, you're awake and you received your powers when you got hit by lightning. It's time for you to finish the prophecy.' 'What prophecy!? Where am I!?" Miss. Dal opened a door and I saw Mr.Taiyo standing next to Karina saying "It's time to end the prophecy." There was a scream, a streak of light, and I felt power running through me and when I looked I saw Karina lying on the floor... with a face full of pain. "End her" Miss. Dal hissed into my ear "End her... now!"
Chapter 3: The battle of life and death
'Kill!? Karina!?' I shouted in my mind. 'Why-' Then I remembered Karina. "Karina! I'm so sorry I didn't know what happened! I was-" She got up and wiped blood from her lip then started chanting "Youlingum danemmembum akateia!' She pointed her finger at me, then zap I was in pain. "KARINA STOP! THIS IS'NT YOU!" I screamed. "Oh, really? You don't even KNOW ME!" She pointed at me again, then pain."I thought we were friends!" I cried. ZAP ZAP ZAP. "Ow...." "friends, us? HA! Branden and Karina, friends. Don't make me laugh!" Zap Zap Zap! I screened in pain, I could fell blood and bruises. My face was wet with tears and blood. "Get up!" Miss Dal cried. Suddenly I felt power surging threw me. "CHANTEIUM LEGIMUS JULIEUS!" I didn't even know where that came from, but whatever I did, it worked. She stared at me with cold eyes of disbelief, then froze. "Ahhh... A freezing charm. Good one." Miss Dal said to me. Then I looked at Karina, something was different Her normally blue eyes were purple! Mr. Haiyo grit his teeth "SEOTULEN!" He cried, I'm guessing it was Korean and he put out his hand, then ZAP! It struct Miss Dal. "BAKKA!" She screened, which was probably Japanese, then hit Mr. Haiyo. He screamed and collapsed. I looked at Karin and her eyes were blue! "Where- where am I? Who are you?" She said pointing to me. She doesn't know, I thought to myself. Then I was weak. I fell to the ground the same time Miss Dal did when Mr. Haiyo did the finishing blow. "Hello young man." He said to me. "I take you and Karina home where I erase your memories. Since I do that I explain. You and Karina never really had powers. Me and Miss Dal did. We were the ones from the prophecy. We just needed a host (someone young) to fight for us. But Miss Dal cheated and fought with me. And you can see how that turned out. When I take you home you will forget all of this..." He picked me and Karina up with ease. "Night." He said, pinching me.
Reihaneh on 16 April, 2020
Oh , coooooool. I like your story. They are so beautiful and I soooo like it . Oh, gooood.
Sophia on 28 December, 2019
Grace on 27 December, 2019
Wow, really good!
sophia on 22 December, 2019
Eclipse on 22 December, 2019
I keep on rereading this ( :
sophia on 16 December, 2019
Thank u the elf
The Elf on 14 December, 2019
it's a good start... I liked it.
sopia on 11 December, 2019
Thank you, Eclipse and Christie, for your kind comments
Christie on 10 December, 2019
Wow, Sophia, it's an amazing story! Very cool powers indeed... And the Sun is training you, I guess
sophia on 9 December, 2019
I'm thinking of writing more... Like we meet the other person and stuff
Eclipse on 9 December, 2019
Good mini story: I liked how the names were actually original unlike names such as Luna and Lyra. Have fun destroying the world : ) My name is just a coincidence : )