Black Feathers: About Us (The Barn Friends Story)

Written by Bon45 and Christie


This story is dedicated to our beloved Barn Friends! Dear Melissa, Gwin (we've called you Jacob) Feuerelfe (we've called you Judith), Annelia, Lesemagier and Insa and Michael, we hope you like it! With most love, Bon45 (Alice) and Christie

Let me tell you a secret: We are not normal.

By “we”, I mean, Black Feathers, a magical organisation of a few children, teens and two adults. Any outsider would think we are just a bunch of travellers, but in reality, we aren’t.

Now, now. Here’s something about our group in a little bit more detailed way.

I’ve got a quite a bunch of names like Bon, Dan, Al etc but let me tell you, I’m a selkie.

My cousin is Christie, and she can turn inanimate objects (esp. lanterns) alive.

Her brother Christopher can pause any moment with his camera.

Melissa can control animals and loves them a lot.

Jacob is our fortune-teller and he has got a bunch of imaginary friends to help him.

Judith can control fire.

Annelia can control wind.

Lesemagier has a number of magical books and he wants to be a wizard.

And last but not the least… are our leaders. Insa, the Lady with a Pegasus and Michael, the Lord with a Dragon.

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Reihaneh – 19 May 2020

It is a goood story. Can I be in the Black Feathers group?

melissa – 17 February 2019

i like to eat pork salamier also and your idea about the next chapter is great!

Melissa – 17 February 2019

Bye Bon and Christie, I will miss you a lot! And all the best for your exams. Hope to meet again soon!

Anonymous Artist – 16 February 2019

I’d be delighted to! Could my character be named A.A and be a mysterious member, powers uncertain?

Charlotte – 15 February 2019

Wow! That sounds amazing! Totally something I whould what to read! I like your writing style!

Melissa – 15 February 2019

My favourite food is biryani! Other than this, I like cakes, chocolates, chicken items etc. I really love to eat. And I really love animals! I will love to control them too! I like this power very much!!!

Feuerelfe – 15 February 2019

Haha, Bon, I like the idea that you ask us questions before you write the next chapter. I personally LOVE lasagna and pizza . And chocolate and vanilla pudding as dessert . And: @Bon&Christie, you know each other in real life?

Gwin – 15 February 2019

Hi Christie, That would be amazing, and you should have a magical pen which enables you to bring objects to life, that you draw with it. Wouldn´t that be great? But anyway, you write the story; I should not iterfere too much. I´m thrilled for the next chapter.

Bon45 – 15 February 2019

Yes fire elf, there would be a sequel for sure!

Christie – 14 February 2019

Hi Gwin! Do you want us to equip you with magical balls? What other role would you like to have?

Melissa – 14 February 2019

Ohhh! You have added me too! Your story is just amazing! Bon, Feuerelfe and Gwin, will you please read my Barn friends story too. My story is Anna Guesthouse. And I have made three characters based on you three.

Grace – 14 February 2019

Melissa – 14 February 2019

Christie, i have added you in my story too. I request you as well as ananimas artist to read my story also.

Christie – 14 February 2019

Hi Gwin! Would you like us to equip you with some magical fire torches? What else role would you like to have?

Christie – 14 February 2019

Hi, Anonymous Artist... would you like to join the Black Feathers?

Bon45 – 14 February 2019

Thank you everyone, so much! But honestly, Christie deserves more credits. She wrote everything when I was just sitting over by the sofa and adding things I want!

Unanimous Artist – 14 February 2019

Interesting so far! I can’t wait to hear more about the ‘Black Feathers.’ I love the creativity, and how you figured out how to include everyone in a way where everyone has a part.

Gwin – 13 February 2019

Hi Bon, your story made me laugh a lot. Personally I would have never considered me as a fortune-teller but it was very funny to find out what roles you gave everyone. I´d have rather seen myself as the one with the fire (I love juggling and as soon as I turn 18 I will buy myself some juggling torches. Since Dustfinger is one of my biggest childhood heros). But you could not have known that. I just found out what a selkie is so thanx for making me discover a new wonderful magical creature. I guess you probably have some water-magic as well as you are our selkie. Anyways I loved the idea of this. And the very first statement is just GOLD. Not Normal, and proud of that! Best Wishes from Germany, Gwin